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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 09, 2008 8:36 pm

Okay, so I totally fixed it, but sorry Han, I had to get my Addie back to the others SOMEHOW, and so I hoping I can use you!!


The hunter carmen posted about I assumed was Haku, so...


in order to get back with Katherine and the other werewolves, I am relying on you!!!


and awkwardness with Ethan..


this'll be interesting, considering the vampire hate on Addie's part.


ahahahahaha


yah, did i fix it??
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 09, 2008 10:07 pm

MAYBE WE SHALL SEE
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 12:02 am

Actually Amanda, you didn't fix it because the scene where Evey is thrown into the car is before Haku's meeting with the wolves and giving them the sword.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 5:39 pm

Woa Amanda, if you're talking about Cory's rendezvous with Arthur and Evelyn. First of all: they weren't even in Houstin when that happened. They were around Cleveland, 50 miles north of Houston. Second of all: Evelyn never got thrown into a car. Laufeia ran her back to Houston. You have to remember: right now your characters are a good few hours ahead of mine. My characters are only just getting to the warehouse part. However, what you wrote could still take place…
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 5:39 pm

I thought my post didn't even post, but I guess it did.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 7:17 pm

It could take place but not the way she wrote it. Because the way she wrote it made it after she met Reino, which was after the double date thing, which was after the meeting.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 8:43 pm

Right, Cory and Loofah, and whoever can still throw Evey in the car for some reason or another at that point in time…except of course…only 2 persons can fit in a dodge viper, MAYbe three.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 9:33 pm

Do ya'll have any idea how cool we are?

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No. Look…haaaada (Rafiki)

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crazy crazy
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 10:47 pm

Oh, i gotcha.

That is so awesome! (referring to the picture above)

I've realized that Maricruz, Vo and me haven't written anything in quite a while.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeTue Jun 10, 2008 11:40 pm

Nope, you haven't. You're pretty much free to now…All I really have to do is write the few moments left in between where I am now and begining of warehouse seen, and then warehouse seen from my ppls pov, then back home to Evey.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 12, 2008 2:58 pm

348,880 Characters
63,275 Words
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 12, 2008 3:39 pm

Cory and gang don't meet Haku till the warehouse meeting right?
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 12, 2008 5:52 pm

Yup, Cory just knows about the Hunters as a group but not by person.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 12, 2008 7:48 pm

okay okay!! i finally understand. so there




its fixed!!! wahhhh, so confusing. i had no idea they were AHEAD like that!!


but okay. ahahahahahaha
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 12, 2008 10:33 pm

Welllllllllll, since Amanda is so ahead of the game and you guys need time to catch up, would ya mind it, terribly, if I distracted her with Reino for a spell?

Just a little interlude to let you catch up is all.
A brief liaison between immortals.

*Grins in a totally unsuspicious way*
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeFri Jun 13, 2008 11:50 am

hey i dont care. i totally fixed it RIGHT this time, after some confusion of what i did...


but i guess. i was hoping that han would help me out with that. but until she actually writes, cause i dont know where everyone exactly IS at the moment...



go ahead.


ah, and what happened to your account on myspace?
youre gone...
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeFri Jun 13, 2008 1:09 pm

ahahahahah. I retalliated against that whole last part in your post, amanda #2



sorry. but it was so... TEMPTING. That whole thing!! You make it so fun to write,,, in complete OPPOSITE of you.

ahahahahahahhahaahahah

sorry again.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeFri Jun 13, 2008 4:04 pm

Hahaha! Not at all, I found it very amusing!

*Claps* Bravo!

Ah yes, now that I have a face book there's no real need for MySpace anymore. Sorry I didn't send any warning. But you can contact me through Face Book, ne?

And if you have other plans, that is fine, but you know all the hype I've been building up for our interlude. *Grins* The next post will be the beginning- the tip of the first domino. So tell me soon if you're not interested.


*Pauses Little Mexican Postal Service*
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeFri Jun 13, 2008 8:51 pm

Crazy Mandy <_<

You WOULD use a mexican postal service, a little one at that (Midget reference?)
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 14, 2008 1:29 am

No one can say I'm discriminating! *points*

AND HE IS not A MIDGET!!!


Note to Addie/Amanda #1:
If you accept my offer, do NOT wake up.
You must remain asleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 14, 2008 9:24 am

Hah that's like saying
"Do you take the red pill or blue pill?"
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 14, 2008 10:44 am

Indeed, it is. *Small smirk*
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 16, 2008 4:42 pm

okay then....? go ahead


should Kieran leave then? or is there going to be conflict...?
id rather them be apart for now.


they need to become enemies
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 16, 2008 7:29 pm

ENEMIIIEESSS

En - Ne - Miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 7 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 16, 2008 10:07 pm

..::sigh::..


you are strange vo....



but yah, enemies. i want epic hate and battling here!!!
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