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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:34 pm

I got a model 26,
But she stays in her place,
I got a curve shirt [?] neatly,
Tucked inside in my waist.

[Inserts Han here] Razz

Keep your hands off my girl,
Keep your hands off my girl


Wow, that made my day.

So are Loofa and Corey going to have some alone time in his car?

Fan fiction anyone?
haha
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 9:42 pm

Only sarah
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 9:45 pm

oowahahaha
Well Sarah you are the fanfic person…seeing as the rest of us actually write.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 9:45 pm

the last time I wrote was like march 18, im still waiting
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2008 4:26 pm

I keep trying to write…and running out of time…eventually, I WILL GET KATHERINE KIDNAPPED. We're pretty close now.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2008 6:09 pm

"Her hand was on his arm before he had finished his sentence, and gone again just as fast."

Wow Carmen, you're no fun.

I think it would have been more entertaining if

her hand rest on his arm a moment longer than absolutely necessary
then
as an almost unnoticeable look of embarrassment flashed across her face [that Cory would not have seen even if he was looking at her] she quickly pulled her hand back and placed it in her lap staring at the road ahead.
[Man. Talk about a run on sentence.Razz ]


Cory smiled. She was very right. "I like…to drive…" he explained, "fast. Besides, the quicker we get this done, the better."
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun May 11, 2008 3:31 pm

hahaha that's very good. I was planning on something…but I had to stop writing and go to my uncles house. So I'm hoping right now I'll get to write while my mom sleeps before we leave for Houston.

Ready, Set, GO!
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yea, not gonna happen, I'll write when i get home
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun May 11, 2008 8:23 pm

I'm hoooooooome.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun May 11, 2008 8:27 pm

WRITE! GO GO GO!
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun May 18, 2008 10:06 pm

oh my goodness, it has been so long since i last wrote here.


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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeTue May 20, 2008 3:46 pm

Oh Amanda
you...
unclean harlot?
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeTue May 20, 2008 3:53 pm

*Laughs heartily* I suppose I deserve it this time... but I rather enjoy my little harem. *evil grin*


Don't hate me because I'm beautiful *dramatic pose*



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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeWed May 21, 2008 10:42 pm

Definitely working on Cory. Had the most ridiculous amout of trouble getting that John bit out.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeThu May 22, 2008 7:28 pm

We're super close to the 100 page mark in my document!


Characters330,533
Words 59,924
Pages 98
Sections 108
FontLucida Grande
Size 11
Margins.25 in. all around

study
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun May 25, 2008 11:17 pm

Yay! First post on page 8!
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeMon May 26, 2008 9:26 pm

congratulations!

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeMon May 26, 2008 9:57 pm

so, we're operating on different parts of the day:

carmen and i:l early hours of the morning (before sunrise)

everyone else: (after sunrise)\


hope that helps.


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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeFri Jun 06, 2008 10:51 pm

What was I thinking?! Dodge vipers don't seat 4 people! I'm such a retard! Good thing I realized that before I posted. Urgh, I have to figure something out now. Looks like Evelyn might have to ride in the trunk, and Arthur…? Or maybe…Oh I dunno, I'll have to come up with something…be creative. I can do that right? Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 07, 2008 12:35 am

Strap her to the roof.
hahaha
I just pictured Maricruz tied to the top of a car.
Wow.


And

Amanda
I hear Snow White mixed with Cinderella
every time I read dialogue for the new girl.
I felt that had to be shared.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 07, 2008 4:51 am

Haha, wow, that's special.
At least the purity came across strong. *Wink*

*Soft sigh* Isn't it all just so... typical?
*Grins, nudging Amanda 1*
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun Jun 08, 2008 7:59 pm

I think Amanda just time traveled a bit.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeSun Jun 08, 2008 8:33 pm

I think she might have…I think we can fix it though…not as bad as that one time Vo and I posted at the same time. Okay I really need to write!
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 09, 2008 1:44 am

Huh???








(God, this is just like English class all over again...

Random Person: "Amanda!"

*Two heads turn in unison*)
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion   Story Discussion - Page 6 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 09, 2008 9:22 am

<_< Ah..Crazy timeloops
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